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Love Poem
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11-04-2010, 10:40 AM
Really excellent storytelling here. The weakest spot is probably the last stanza (if you could even call it "weak")... for me the final lines were ace, and it just took a little too long getting there.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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RE: Love Poem - by billy - 11-03-2010, 03:03 PM
RE: Love Poem - by heslopian - 11-03-2010, 07:25 PM
RE: Love Poem - by billy - 11-04-2010, 08:24 AM
RE: Love Poem - by heslopian - 11-04-2010, 08:32 AM
RE: Love Poem - by addy - 11-04-2010, 10:40 AM
RE: Love Poem - by heslopian - 11-05-2010, 02:03 AM
RE: Love Poem - by Todd - 11-04-2010, 10:57 AM
RE: Love Poem - by Todd - 11-05-2010, 04:08 AM
RE: Love Poem - by heslopian - 11-05-2010, 04:12 AM
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