11-04-2010, 10:37 AM
Billy: I found your edit suggestions very helpful. I tried my best to apply them on this revision. Do you think it's stronger now? Thank you for the feedback.
Jack:Thank you the very kind words I'm glad the metaphors worked. I do appreciate your comments.
Addy: Thank you. You are very encouraging. I'm glad it was a great read for you.
I appreciate everything you all said. I'm enjoying this poem and I'd like it to come together so thanks for sticking with it.
Best,
Todd
Jack:Thank you the very kind words I'm glad the metaphors worked. I do appreciate your comments.
Addy: Thank you. You are very encouraging. I'm glad it was a great read for you.
I appreciate everything you all said. I'm enjoying this poem and I'd like it to come together so thanks for sticking with it.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson