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Untitled Melancholy
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11-04-2010, 10:10 AM
Wonderful. Everything's great, and the third stanza was my favorite... understated, but carries so much atmosphere and character in it, a great support for the rest of the poem.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Untitled Melancholy - by heslopian - 11-03-2010, 10:50 PM
RE: Untitled Melancholy - by billy - 11-04-2010, 09:25 AM
RE: Untitled Melancholy - by addy - 11-04-2010, 10:10 AM
RE: Untitled Melancholy - by heslopian - 11-05-2010, 02:08 AM
RE: Untitled Melancholy - by Todd - 11-16-2010, 04:01 AM
RE: Untitled Melancholy - by heslopian - 11-16-2010, 04:15 AM
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