11-04-2010, 09:25 AM
i think this has nits in a few places but i think they disappear the more you read.
i found the last verse to be sad and at the same time beautiful
the 3rd stanza is the same. it has a haunting quality. a sadness that overlays
his need to be alone and longing not to be.
the penultimate stanza again carries so much sadness.
the fear of loneliness, the reality of it being there for ever.
after a few reads i found it to be an excellent write jack. (for me)
thanks for the read
i found the last verse to be sad and at the same time beautiful
the 3rd stanza is the same. it has a haunting quality. a sadness that overlays
his need to be alone and longing not to be.
the penultimate stanza again carries so much sadness.
the fear of loneliness, the reality of it being there for ever.
after a few reads i found it to be an excellent write jack. (for me)
thanks for the read