11-04-2010, 08:32 AM
(11-04-2010, 08:24 AM)billy Wrote: i meant it was out of character for the piece. while i found most of it to be mature that part just felt like it should be in another poem of less substance.haha Yeah I'm sure that line has appeared before in a thousand shitty Mills & Boon novels now you mention it
of course thats jmo.
the good thing about putting poems into drawers is that when we take them out we can often spot what needs doing fairly easily. it's why i don't think a poem should ever be discarded.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe