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The Empty Cave (Revision)
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11-03-2010, 01:00 AM
For some reason this reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe. Probably the strange narrative and slow build up of dread. Thanks for the read, Todd; I'll take great pleasure in chewing over this piece. One quibble: should "It is the horse?" really be a question, and if so, shouldn't it read "Is it the horse?"
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 10-31-2010, 07:17 AM
RE: The Empty Cave - by billy - 10-31-2010, 01:06 PM
RE: The Empty Cave - by Todd - 10-31-2010, 01:11 PM
RE: The Empty Cave - by heslopian - 11-03-2010, 01:00 AM
RE: The Empty Cave - by Todd - 11-11-2010, 05:26 AM
RE: The Empty Cave - by Lawrence - 11-16-2010, 03:08 AM
RE: The Empty Cave - by Todd - 11-16-2010, 03:42 AM
RE: The Empty Cave - by billy - 11-16-2010, 05:52 AM
RE: The Empty Cave - by Lawrence - 11-16-2010, 04:34 AM
RE: The Empty Cave - by Todd - 11-16-2010, 05:16 AM
RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 01-12-2011, 05:54 AM
RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by billy - 01-12-2011, 11:27 AM
RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 01-12-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 01-12-2011, 03:06 PM
RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by billy - 01-12-2011, 03:13 PM
RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by Todd - 01-12-2011, 03:18 PM
RE: The Empty Cave (Revision) - by billy - 01-13-2011, 11:36 AM
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