You Call Them Fairy Tales

You Call Them Fairy Tales

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11-02-2010, 10:59 AM

Hi All,

I made a revision, and like anything wondered if it works better. I feel better about the teeth line not sure about the restructured ending--wondered what you all thought.

Thanks,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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You Call Them Fairy Tales - by Todd - 10-17-2010, 02:31 AM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by billy - 10-17-2010, 09:57 AM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by Todd - 10-17-2010, 10:20 AM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by heslopian - 10-17-2010, 01:49 PM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 02:23 AM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-18-2010, 08:41 AM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 10:15 AM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by Todd - 11-02-2010, 10:59 AM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by billy - 11-02-2010, 11:19 AM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by heslopian - 11-02-2010, 09:07 PM

RE: You Call Them Fairy Tales - by Todd - 11-11-2010, 05:19 AM

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