The Fine Art of Concealing Food
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it's actually sad but it made me laugh, or at least smile a little

for me the last word doesn't work and therefore isn't needed. ( a small nit i know)
i'm sure lots will feel an affinity to this one. it has a sad kind of humour in its words.
a good narrative poem

thanks for the read as always.
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The Fine Art of Concealing Food - by heslopian - 11-02-2010, 08:20 AM
RE: The Fine Art of Concealing Food - by billy - 11-02-2010, 10:27 AM



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