11-02-2010, 10:27 AM
it's actually sad but it made me laugh, or at least smile a little
for me the last word doesn't work and therefore isn't needed. ( a small nit i know)
i'm sure lots will feel an affinity to this one. it has a sad kind of humour in its words.
a good narrative poem
thanks for the read as always.
for me the last word doesn't work and therefore isn't needed. ( a small nit i know)
i'm sure lots will feel an affinity to this one. it has a sad kind of humour in its words.
a good narrative poem
thanks for the read as always.
