Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin

Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin

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10-31-2010, 01:06 PM

Billy,

This was really cool. I loved incandescing puberty. Great descriptive writing throughout. The last four lines closed this one out strong.

Thanks for getting us started.

Best,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin - by Todd - 10-31-2010, 06:48 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin - by billy - 10-31-2010, 10:38 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin - by Todd - 10-31-2010, 01:06 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin - by Todd - 11-03-2010, 11:05 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin - by billy - 11-03-2010, 11:52 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin - by billy - 11-03-2010, 11:54 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin - by Todd - 11-03-2010, 11:48 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 1: 10 Words From Philip Larkin - by billy - 11-09-2010, 06:02 AM

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