10-31-2010, 01:06 PM
i was going to come back to this one.
i've read and re read it and have some thoughts as to the content.
it feels like an intent to get through to someone, a child maybe.
the horse has me puzzled and all i can think of is the horse being the only thing
that lights a spark in someone's eyes. that makes both sides aware of something
happening. the poem itself has a depth which entices the reader to want to take
part in some lesson. the reader (me)struggles but non the less is compelled to
take part or be a part of what's going on within the poem.
sometimes a poem works by leaving the reader to wonder if they got the intent of the writer.
this is one of them. as the reader i don't want to know if i'm correct i just want to think i am, does that make any sense.
some good images and for me a well written piece of poetry.
thanks for the read todd.
i've read and re read it and have some thoughts as to the content.
it feels like an intent to get through to someone, a child maybe.
the horse has me puzzled and all i can think of is the horse being the only thing
that lights a spark in someone's eyes. that makes both sides aware of something
happening. the poem itself has a depth which entices the reader to want to take
part in some lesson. the reader (me)struggles but non the less is compelled to
take part or be a part of what's going on within the poem.
sometimes a poem works by leaving the reader to wonder if they got the intent of the writer.
this is one of them. as the reader i don't want to know if i'm correct i just want to think i am, does that make any sense.
some good images and for me a well written piece of poetry.
thanks for the read todd.