Nuance

[billy]

for me i think it could do with a strong image in the last 2 lines.

as it is (again for me) the poem can be taken 2 ways.

a) a breakdown of a relationship
b) the beginning of a new one.

the ring twisting definitely denotes a time to move on which i think is the essence of the poem; moving on.

easy to miss ties the poem to the title.

thanks for the read todd.