Dirge
#3
for me you need some
sorrowful rhythm maybe using 7 syls per line.
thats shows a bit of grief. (it's a dirge not a parody of a dirge Wink )

just- a-fright-ened--litt--le---girl,
dah-de-dah---de---dah-de---dah

fear-ful--of--a-fath-ers-smile
dah-de-dah-de-dah-de--dah

quick to-fing--er and de--file
dah--de-dah-de-dah-de--dah <----sorry jack i couldn't help meself Sad

stalking her till sixty-four
when she waded out from shore
never did we see her frown
ne'r a person saw her drown

dah--de-dah-de-dah-de--dah......
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Dirge - by heslopian - 10-27-2010, 08:51 AM
RE: Dirge - by Todd - 10-27-2010, 10:16 AM
RE: Dirge - by billy - 10-27-2010, 11:04 AM
RE: Dirge - by heslopian - 10-27-2010, 06:40 PM
RE: Dirge - by billy - 10-27-2010, 07:10 PM
RE: Dirge - by heslopian - 10-27-2010, 09:34 PM



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