Living with Batman

[billy]

and I mean the Michael Keaton
kind, not the campy Adam West,
or that sissy Val Kilmer,
nor the dullard George Clooney,
and though Christian Bale
looks good in leather,
he's just too sadistic for me.

i got a laugh from the above verse for some reason.
i've been through the poem a few times and the only nit i have is grammar.
you use it, why don't you use it properly and cap the beginning of sentences. okay, i know it's not a rule that has to be followed but for me if you're going to use grammar in general use it as it should be used.

if you just use it for emphasis, leave out the end of line comma's and let the white space give the pause.

it's as prose as hell but non the less i think it a really good piece of poetry
i refuse to give you the praise it deserves

seriously jack this for me is a great poem.
i love the way you inject the sexuality into the poem without making it
slap you round the face like a wet fish.

thanks for the read.