10-25-2010, 07:11 AM
Thank you so much for the feedback and really kind words, Todd
I'm surprised at how well that second poem has been received, especially as I thought the ending might by seen as contrived.
I'll pull the "and" down a line when I've finished this comment; I doubt you're the only who'd pick that out, Todd. The enjambment does look a little sloppy.
Thanks again for all your kind words, they really mean the world to me, and I'll make sure to look up that poet you mentioned.
I'm surprised at how well that second poem has been received, especially as I thought the ending might by seen as contrived.I'll pull the "and" down a line when I've finished this comment; I doubt you're the only who'd pick that out, Todd. The enjambment does look a little sloppy.
Thanks again for all your kind words, they really mean the world to me, and I'll make sure to look up that poet you mentioned.