Faith Like a Child

[billy]

Thanks guys, I have made some edits, will continue to do so. Better, worse?

not much of an edit but it goes to show, even a small edit can make a big improvement.

i think it's much better sadie.

still struggling with thy
but that's just me.

When he said you won't make it
without faith like a child,

he didn't mean blindly stumble
but to cradle your faith
like a small child.;

we can presume god is still here.
with that thought in mind, would it have been better to write it in present tense. IE;

he says you won't make it
without faith like a child

don't blindly stumble
but cradle your faith <----just an idea to be discarded or changed

the 2nd like a small child feels a bit redundant.
an image to show what you mean here would be great.

btw sadie, did i get the meaning of the content?