10-23-2010, 06:53 AM
(10-22-2010, 11:06 AM)addy Wrote: Wow, I love the tone of this piece. The POV makes it sound objective and neutral, but at the same time it actually highlights the sensuality of the words... like a barrier that makes it all the more fascinating. This was a great readHi Addy,
Thank you for your comments. I'm glad you liked it.
As always much appreciated,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

