Two Poems Written in Philosophy Class

[heslopian]

Beautiful poems, and they work superbly together... just loving the incisiveness and the truth in it, really capturing the feel and taste of a certain kind of experience, a certain kind of life. There's a feel and emotion to the narrator that really brings the poems to life. Love the repetition in the closing line.

P.S. "Philosophy class is the cure for gayness" is a classic line .

Thanks addy My spur of the moment poems always do better than my more considered ones, and I'm not sure how I feel about that yet...
Glad I gave you a laugh with the last lines of the first poem, and that you liked the repetition as well; I worried that that finale might seem contrived.

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i wouldn't change a thing. to me the two are perfect as a pair
and really compliment each other. the first i found funny because
of the last 4 lines. the poem (two parter) speaks for itself and
does so without much ado, i found it to be a good solid read.

thanks for putting it up jack, (no pun intended ) jmo

Thanks Billy You're praise often tastes much sweeter than most, because I know how cutting you can be
Not sure I quite grasp your pun, though...