10-22-2010, 11:06 AM
Wow, I love the tone of this piece. The POV makes it sound objective and neutral, but at the same time it actually highlights the sensuality of the words... like a barrier that makes it all the more fascinating. This was a great read
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
