Infatuation
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Wow, I love the tone of this piece. The POV makes it sound objective and neutral, but at the same time it actually highlights the sensuality of the words... like a barrier that makes it all the more fascinating. This was a great read Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Infatuation - by Todd - 10-21-2010, 12:55 PM
RE: Infatuation - by addy - 10-22-2010, 11:06 AM
RE: Infatuation - by Todd - 10-23-2010, 06:53 AM
RE: Infatuation - by billy - 10-22-2010, 11:19 AM
RE: Infatuation - by Todd - 10-23-2010, 10:18 AM
RE: Infatuation - by heslopian - 10-23-2010, 12:37 AM
RE: Infatuation - by billy - 10-23-2010, 01:57 PM



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