10-20-2010, 08:33 AM
When I was a kid, I had a nightmare about a red balloon and a clown. The first verse of this poem reminded me of that dream.
Haha, but in all seriousness, great poem. I feel it was about a love that slipped away and you can't quite forget her. I could be wrong, but this is what I got from it. It had some really beautiful parts to it. It also seemed a bit cliche at parts, but it fit. So thanks for the poem! I liked it a lot!
Haha, but in all seriousness, great poem. I feel it was about a love that slipped away and you can't quite forget her. I could be wrong, but this is what I got from it. It had some really beautiful parts to it. It also seemed a bit cliche at parts, but it fit. So thanks for the poem! I liked it a lot!