10-20-2010, 06:05 AM
Don't take credit for the author's mistake, Todd
If it wasn't clear whose funeral I was referring to, or even how many deaths there'd been, the blame rests squarely with me. Looking back, I can see where you're coming from. I wonder how many other readers arrived the same conclusion... I hate writing prose haha. I've been trying to simplify my style ever since I wrote this, so similar mistakes aren't made.
If it wasn't clear whose funeral I was referring to, or even how many deaths there'd been, the blame rests squarely with me. Looking back, I can see where you're coming from. I wonder how many other readers arrived the same conclusion... I hate writing prose haha. I've been trying to simplify my style ever since I wrote this, so similar mistakes aren't made.