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The Red Balloon (Revision Formerly: What Must Come)

The Red Balloon (Revision Formerly: What Must Come)
Todd Offline
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10-19-2010, 12:09 PM
They are only right if they turn out to be otherwise they're not lol

It's okay Billy I appreciate all critique but don't worry I don't always follow it.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: What Must Come - by billy - 10-18-2010, 09:48 AM
RE: What Must Come - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 10:14 AM
RE: What Must Come - by billy - 10-19-2010, 11:32 AM
RE: What Must Come - by Todd - 10-19-2010, 12:09 PM
RE: What Must Come - by lizzyrose12 - 10-20-2010, 08:33 AM
RE: What Must Come - by Todd - 10-20-2010, 10:36 AM



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