Howard and the Details

[Todd]

Perfectly structured free verse piece; your line breaks are precise and effective. Don't know much about Howard Hughes beyond his problems with OCD and reclusiveness in later life, but you convey those things very well here. The Kleenexes line held resonance with me.

Thank you so much I appreciate your kind comments. I'm glad you liked the kleenex lines that felt risky for me when I wrote it but it seemed to be consistent with Hughes.

Best,

Todd