The Red Balloon (Revision Formerly: What Must Come)
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Hi Billy,

I'll look into the pacing on S1 (and S2 for that matter). Thanks for your feedback on what worked and didn't work for you. It's a first draft so I expected there would be things to work on.

I do appreciate the comments they are helpful.

Best,

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: What Must Come - by billy - 10-18-2010, 09:48 AM
RE: What Must Come - by Todd - 10-18-2010, 10:14 AM
RE: What Must Come - by billy - 10-19-2010, 11:32 AM
RE: What Must Come - by Todd - 10-19-2010, 12:09 PM
RE: What Must Come - by lizzyrose12 - 10-20-2010, 08:33 AM
RE: What Must Come - by Todd - 10-20-2010, 10:36 AM



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