Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5)
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(10-18-2010, 02:35 AM)Todd Wrote:  It is this dyslexic language I hate
words that scurry and slink
rearrange themselves before
I can speak.

But somebody killed something,
or something-or-other!
I stand by my story.
No lucid dream
to wake from, I tire
of these suggestions.

So childish to fear the dark
night’s plunge into anonymity.
It is the eyes that draw
the Bandersnatch--
claws that scrape,
claws that catch.

You have removed my vanity—
the need to mince gingerly.
I no longer sit to brush my hair,
nor eat without the ache
within my bones.

This glass isn’t cold as you suspect,
the fire leaks like a warm breath.
I feel the grin float
over my shoulder, the last beacon
to fade away.

Todd, you are a great poet! I've read some of your other poems and wow! I really liked this one especially. Good work!
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RE: Psychiatric Transcript: The Wonderland Delusion - by lizzyrose12 - 10-18-2010, 03:28 AM
RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by milo - 11-08-2013, 08:56 AM
RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by Todd - 11-08-2013, 09:13 AM
RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by ellajam - 11-08-2013, 09:20 PM
RE: Alice in the Asylum (Revision 3) - by Todd - 11-08-2013, 09:25 PM



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