10-17-2010, 10:05 AM
don't get me wrong Todd.
the allusions are great. and i wouldn't want any of them to disappear.
as a reader i'd just like some of the concrete images to be pointed out as such.
ie;
red-dressed addict in frayed
fishnets, covered with drywall
is a great image but for me comes across as an allusion.
the allusions are great. and i wouldn't want any of them to disappear.
as a reader i'd just like some of the concrete images to be pointed out as such.
ie;
red-dressed addict in frayed
fishnets, covered with drywall
is a great image but for me comes across as an allusion.