Making People Laugh By William. Marsland.

Making People Laugh By William. Marsland.

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10-17-2010, 08:17 AM

hi, nice critique todd.

i'll certainly takes what you say on board when i do an edit.
obviously i just had a re read of the poem and at first glance i think you have a valid point
re the ending.

thanks for the feedback.

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Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by billy - 07-15-2010, 11:16 AM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by Bianca Alabaster - 07-15-2010, 01:47 PM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by billy - 07-15-2010, 02:46 PM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by addy - 07-16-2010, 02:25 PM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by billy - 07-16-2010, 05:18 PM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by addy - 07-21-2010, 05:32 PM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by billy - 07-22-2010, 10:47 AM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 11:53 PM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by Todd - 10-17-2010, 03:03 AM

RE: Making People Laugh By William. Marsland. - by billy - 10-17-2010, 08:17 AM

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