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Bus Stop Considerations
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10-14-2010, 10:47 AM
(10-14-2010, 10:30 AM)Heslopian Wrote: Thank you for your kind words, lizzy, and for allowing my work a second chanceI don't know actually, It just didn't appeal to me. But I got the verses stuck in my head and I read it again and I really liked it! |
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Bus Stop Considerations - by heslopian - 10-12-2010, 03:07 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by billy - 10-12-2010, 08:13 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by heslopian - 10-12-2010, 06:33 PM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by billy - 10-12-2010, 06:52 PM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by heslopian - 10-13-2010, 12:27 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by billy - 10-13-2010, 04:55 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by lizzyrose12 - 10-14-2010, 09:30 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by heslopian - 10-14-2010, 10:30 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by lizzyrose12 - 10-14-2010, 10:47 AM
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What didn't you like about it the first time round, may I ask?