10-14-2010, 10:26 AM
Ask as many as you wish, lizzy! That's why we're here on the poetry forum; to give each other critique and thus improve our work
I'm gonna grab some shuteye now, but I will read your poem with the attention it deserves at some point tomorrow and offer my thoughts.
I'm gonna grab some shuteye now, but I will read your poem with the attention it deserves at some point tomorrow and offer my thoughts.

