10-13-2010, 04:49 PM
(10-13-2010, 11:39 AM)addy Wrote: These are gorgeous. The third one especially is so perfect, I can't get it out of my head.Nah, it wasn't supposed to be political; thanks for calling my attention to that, Addy
If I had to pick a minor nitpick, it would be the line "heaven-bound nazis". I love it on its own, and god knows I agree, but that one phrase is so compactly rife with political and social underpinnings that for a moment it distracted me from the flow of the rest of the scene, especially compared directly to the following line... but perhaps that was the point I'm missing?
This is just gold. Genius.
And thanks also for your lovely words!