10-13-2010, 11:47 AM
Oh I think it's a great poem as it is.
Your poem reminds me of one that I wrote (I'll post it). Meloncholy isn't a bad mood as long as you don't stay there forever and it makes for good poetry pieces. Good luck to you
Your poem reminds me of one that I wrote (I'll post it). Meloncholy isn't a bad mood as long as you don't stay there forever and it makes for good poetry pieces. Good luck to you
Bianca

