10-13-2010, 11:39 AM
These are gorgeous. The third one especially is so perfect, I can't get it out of my head.
If I had to pick a minor nitpick, it would be the line "heaven-bound nazis". I love it on its own, and god knows I agree, but that one phrase is so compactly rife with political and social underpinnings that for a moment it distracted me from the flow of the rest of the scene, especially compared directly to the following line... but perhaps that was the point I'm missing?
This is just gold. Genius.
If I had to pick a minor nitpick, it would be the line "heaven-bound nazis". I love it on its own, and god knows I agree, but that one phrase is so compactly rife with political and social underpinnings that for a moment it distracted me from the flow of the rest of the scene, especially compared directly to the following line... but perhaps that was the point I'm missing?
This is just gold. Genius.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?