Bus Stop Considerations
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Thanks so much for the kind words, Billy, and for helping with my spelling (again!)Smile I wonder how I'd do at one of those American spelling bees? Shit probablyHysterical
Yeah I was thinking of putting an asterisk after "Tommy" to explain what it means.
Thanks for complimenting my metaphors and similes; I have been working on those, especially in trimming down my use of the word "like."
Glad you enjoy my style as well; I sometimes wonder if I go too far with what I reveal through my work. I'm not as brave as Anne Sexton.
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Bus Stop Considerations - by heslopian - 10-12-2010, 03:07 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by billy - 10-12-2010, 08:13 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by heslopian - 10-12-2010, 06:33 PM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by billy - 10-12-2010, 06:52 PM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by heslopian - 10-13-2010, 12:27 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by billy - 10-13-2010, 04:55 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by lizzyrose12 - 10-14-2010, 09:30 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by heslopian - 10-14-2010, 10:30 AM
RE: Bus Stop Considerations - by lizzyrose12 - 10-14-2010, 10:47 AM



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