10-12-2010, 06:18 PM
almost.
it's a child's dream.
via, pretty prow
splosh, splosh
roll back the sheets and trim the mast (metaphor)
last line, metaphor for going to school or doing something he doesn't want to.
like i say, if it wasn't clear it wasn't clear and that's my fault as the writer.
it's a child's dream.
via, pretty prow
splosh, splosh
roll back the sheets and trim the mast (metaphor)
last line, metaphor for going to school or doing something he doesn't want to.
like i say, if it wasn't clear it wasn't clear and that's my fault as the writer.