10-08-2010, 11:34 PM
@Bianca - Thanks for the feedback and kind words
The narrator is me, all the way through. I'm the one making the observations and I'm the one contemplating suicide.
The full line reads: "Outside his temporary home," so I think that's right, though I can see how the line break before "home" might be confusing. Thanks for calling my attention to it
@addy - Thanks for the kind words, and the comparison to the Robert Frost poem! I read that just the other day
The narrator is me, all the way through. I'm the one making the observations and I'm the one contemplating suicide. The full line reads: "Outside his temporary home," so I think that's right, though I can see how the line break before "home" might be confusing. Thanks for calling my attention to it
@addy - Thanks for the kind words, and the comparison to the Robert Frost poem! I read that just the other day