Making Light
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(10-08-2010, 11:12 AM)Heslopian Wrote:  Over turkey dad explained
just why two men can't consumate
their "sacred" wedding vows.
I paused for comic effect at this point.
My fork, having speared
a lump of white meat,
halted in mid-air; I rolled my eyes
then put it back on the plate.
Nanny laughed. She was the only one
who'd noticed my gag.
consummate<----
the way it's told holds a vignette of family life at the dinner table.
you seeming shocked at your dad's words and nanny knowing better. (i think ) not earth shattering but effective, funny and realistically life like.

i saw someone say at du, it's like bukowski. for me it has a modern oscar wild feel about it. (bukowski was a ladies man.) or a perfect stephen fry anecdote.
thanks for the read.
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Making Light - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 11:12 AM
RE: Making Light - by billy - 10-08-2010, 12:53 PM
RE: Making Light - by addy - 10-08-2010, 01:41 PM
RE: Making Light - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 10:57 PM
RE: Making Light - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-08-2010, 03:12 PM
RE: Making Light - by billy - 10-08-2010, 09:40 PM



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