Chip Shop
#9
@addy - Thanks for the feedback and kind wordsSmile I have trouble ending poems, which is no doubt why that last line sounds curt. But as I don't think I'll do any better, I'll leave it be for now.
Thanks again for the encouraging wordsWink

@billy - haha Sorry I'm such a fucking dunce sometimesHysterical
Reply


Messages In This Thread
Chip Shop - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 07:48 AM
RE: Chip Shop - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-08-2010, 09:02 AM
RE: Chip Shop - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 09:05 AM
RE: Chip Shop - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-08-2010, 09:19 AM
RE: Chip Shop - by billy - 10-08-2010, 09:24 AM
RE: Chip Shop - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 09:57 AM
RE: Chip Shop - by addy - 10-08-2010, 10:24 AM
RE: Chip Shop - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 10:31 AM
RE: Chip Shop - by billy - 10-08-2010, 10:26 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!