10-08-2010, 10:31 AM
@addy - Thanks for the feedback and kind words
I have trouble ending poems, which is no doubt why that last line sounds curt. But as I don't think I'll do any better, I'll leave it be for now.
Thanks again for the encouraging words
@billy - haha Sorry I'm such a fucking dunce sometimes
I have trouble ending poems, which is no doubt why that last line sounds curt. But as I don't think I'll do any better, I'll leave it be for now.Thanks again for the encouraging words

@billy - haha Sorry I'm such a fucking dunce sometimes

