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Caravan Holiday
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10-08-2010, 10:12 AM
Great piece. I like that despite the theme, it's not exactly grim... more a contemplation, like "stopping by woods on a snowy evening". Also, the line "much too much" tripped me up at first, but upon re-reading it, it worked.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Caravan Holiday - by heslopian - 10-06-2010, 11:29 AM
RE: Caravan Holiday - by billy - 10-06-2010, 12:22 PM
RE: Caravan Holiday - by heslopian - 10-06-2010, 09:33 PM
RE: Caravan Holiday - by billy - 10-07-2010, 08:22 AM
RE: Caravan Holiday - by heslopian - 10-07-2010, 08:39 AM
RE: Caravan Holiday - by billy - 10-07-2010, 10:04 AM
RE: Caravan Holiday - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-08-2010, 09:33 AM
RE: Caravan Holiday - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 11:34 PM
RE: Caravan Holiday - by addy - 10-08-2010, 10:12 AM
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