10-08-2010, 08:58 AM
Tumult can refer to:
violent and noisy commotion or disturbance of a crowd.
a general outbreak or disorder, riot.
mental or emotional disturbance.
Here is what wikepedia says: above. I get your point though, perhaps not used as a verb but more as an expression. I meant it as "mental or emotional disturbance" I think I'd change the stanza to:
Many streams of rivers
tumult down the window.
Thank you for your comments, I liked what you wrote. I did write the poem and somehow I can't find the heart to change it, it calls to me to be left untouched. Your favorite verse is mine too! and yes I was stuck about the exclamation point but could not agree with myself so left it where it was. ha! funny thing the mind. LOL.
violent and noisy commotion or disturbance of a crowd.
a general outbreak or disorder, riot.
mental or emotional disturbance.
Here is what wikepedia says: above. I get your point though, perhaps not used as a verb but more as an expression. I meant it as "mental or emotional disturbance" I think I'd change the stanza to:
Many streams of rivers
tumult down the window.
Thank you for your comments, I liked what you wrote. I did write the poem and somehow I can't find the heart to change it, it calls to me to be left untouched. Your favorite verse is mine too! and yes I was stuck about the exclamation point but could not agree with myself so left it where it was. ha! funny thing the mind. LOL.
Bianca 