10-06-2010, 04:01 AM
I loved it. It was very original. The whole use of the poetry in a sensuous way (I wouldn't say it was erotic poetry even though you had the erotic actions) was great. Your imagery is also top-notch. Bill has mentioned the theatre image, which is to be honest, an astonishing metaphor.
I didn't get all of your ideas,but maybe that was just because I did not know who Anne Sexton was so I just took it as her being your (if you like) idol/woman of your dreams. Still, it was intensely vivid for me.
Good read, thanks
. For anyone who (like me) didn't know who Anne Sexton was, this should help:
I didn't get all of your ideas,but maybe that was just because I did not know who Anne Sexton was so I just took it as her being your (if you like) idol/woman of your dreams. Still, it was intensely vivid for me.
Good read, thanks
. For anyone who (like me) didn't know who Anne Sexton was, this should help: