10-05-2010, 04:56 PM
(10-05-2010, 04:43 PM)MarkusSinclair Wrote: Appreciated, some of the kinks are intentional, so the the reader is thrown off and observes that particualr passage more closely. Also, perfect meter can get rather boring don't you think?Ah, I stand corrected then
. And yes indeed, a more versatile rhythm can help break through a lull
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
