10-05-2010, 04:39 PM
Can't say I fully understand the identity of the "night horse" but the poem gave enough of an impression of it... I like how mysterious it is, actually. A very dark, strange, and thoughtful piece, with an intriguing narrator/protagonist. The images are equal parts striking and subdued, and there's so much simmering under the surface. Can't fault any of it, really. Excellent piece.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?