Three Haiku

[addy]

billy already summed up the point about the seasonal themes of haiku. Still, even though these pieces didn't strictly abide by the form they were all lovely vignettes. My tiniest quibble would be in the third haiku: "beauty descending like stairs"-- it's killing me, because I really love the line, but combined with the rest of the piece it didn't feel like the metaphor did anything to enhance your story (because essentially, haiku's read like story fragments). I think I know your meaning, though, so perhaps a slightly sharper twist to the image will do the trick.

Thanks for sharing