Barabbas By William Marsland.

Barabbas By William Marsland.

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10-04-2010, 09:13 AM

thanks for the feedback jack

i'll see what i can do about the grammar. gay's def needs an apostrophe.
and i'll think about the rewrite you did to see if i can get something from it.

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Barabbas By William Marsland. - by billy - 09-15-2010, 03:16 PM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by Touchstone - 09-15-2010, 07:54 PM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by billy - 09-15-2010, 08:06 PM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by addy - 09-17-2010, 12:17 PM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-26-2010, 11:07 AM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by billy - 09-27-2010, 08:57 AM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by heslopian - 10-04-2010, 09:01 AM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by billy - 10-04-2010, 09:13 AM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by heslopian - 10-04-2010, 09:41 AM

RE: Barabbas By William Marsland. - by billy - 10-04-2010, 11:19 AM

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