Inheritance

[heslopian]

good strong poem (is it okay to call ya jack) heslopian.

some really good lines and imagery; way too many to mention.

L2 tall and narrow like models, expose ;

what a fantastic simile for a window.
there's many more in the poem but i wish i'd wrote this one.

this poem would be out of place on the printed page. extremely well done
thanks for the read.

Thanks for the kind words, Billy, and of course you can call me Jack!

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Your imagery is just excellent... you've got a real gift for language, with the skill and depth of someone writing for years. At points it's a rant poem, but your use of image stops it short of being overbearing.

I don't think the parentheses you put in your closing lines is at all necessary, though that's just me.

Great read!

Thanks for the feedback and the kind words, addy Yeah, I'm not fond of that whole final stanza, really. I thought the poem needed a summation of what the point was, but it didn't turn out so well.