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No More Tears

No More Tears
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The Dog's Bollocks.
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#5
09-30-2010, 09:48 AM
Thanks for posting this, though it must be hard to write. Those last lines were shiver-worthy.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Messages In This Thread
No More Tears - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-26-2010, 12:03 PM
RE: No More Tears - by billy - 09-27-2010, 08:55 AM
RE: No More Tears - by DUBLIN5 - 09-27-2010, 10:58 AM
RE: No More Tears - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-27-2010, 12:39 PM
RE: No More Tears - by addy - 09-30-2010, 09:48 AM
RE: No More Tears - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-02-2010, 06:44 AM
RE: No More Tears - by heslopian - 10-02-2010, 11:47 PM
RE: No More Tears - by Bianca Alabaster - 10-08-2010, 08:58 AM



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