Urbanised by William Marsland.

[addy]

I like it. I even like your use of many words to give it a fast, fluttering pace in the middle... it really does remind me of the quick motions of birds that fly by the window. A very minor thing i would personally tweak is the first line, "a countryside of sorts". 'Of sorts' sounds unnecessarily lukewarm and unsure, so it could be rephrased.

Thanks for this