09-06-2010, 10:42 AM
Lots of great lines here, my favorites were stanza 2 and 5... superb!
It felt kind of thoughtful, and not exactly sad, but more of a peaceful passing. the beauty of writing is that you never really "lose" these things.
It felt kind of thoughtful, and not exactly sad, but more of a peaceful passing. the beauty of writing is that you never really "lose" these things.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?