09-04-2010, 08:53 AM
not a lot for me to work on addy.
you left little to critique apart from a well written poem about
the need/wanting to know of love and how to achieve it. (jmo )
sounds like the person within the poem doesn't really believes love exists
and wants some hard truth.
i found it to be very clean and neat in truth i didn't find anything i would change.thanks for the read.
you left little to critique apart from a well written poem about
the need/wanting to know of love and how to achieve it. (jmo )
sounds like the person within the poem doesn't really believes love exists
and wants some hard truth.
i found it to be very clean and neat in truth i didn't find anything i would change.thanks for the read.