08-18-2010, 03:06 PM
(06-23-2010, 06:03 PM)digna_sofia Wrote: I've been told you like cheesehow come i never saw this one
The dairy kind
and the other kind
- the one in romance
(Don't be crass)
You like its bite
and to bite;
the give against your teeth
the spread of salty-sour
something,
the richness
on your tongue.
You like comfort
with complexity,
the preparation
and the wait.
The possibilities.
I've been told you like cheese.
Would you care for a slice?
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Because I wanted to be silly and not really think about it.

for me it doesn't need the last two lines.
other than that it's a rotund piece of titillating mastication.
nicely done.
