I Wish by William Marsland.
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the puppy went to the same place the little girl did Tongue

but i see what you mean about the last line. it does feel a little forced.
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I Wish by William Marsland. - by billy - 08-17-2010, 03:26 PM
RE: I Wish by William Marsland. - by addy - 08-18-2010, 08:22 AM
RE: I Wish by William Marsland. - by billy - 08-18-2010, 08:32 AM
RE: I Wish by William Marsland. - by addy - 08-18-2010, 08:38 AM



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